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« Reply #15 on: March 29, 2006, 12:44:33 PM »
"Brokeback Hamster" is imaginative, Gnash. You personified a little critter that expressed himself in emotional human terms.

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« Reply #16 on: March 29, 2006, 12:48:13 PM »
Ellen, "I Dream of San Francisco" is a certainly a tribute.

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« Reply #17 on: March 29, 2006, 11:18:38 PM »




Wasting Time

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Sitting alone by the computer
as the clock ticks by the minutes
I am being kept company
by the refridgerator
as it's moter drones on and on
and I wonder
how much of my life I've wasted
trying to be what others wanted
and not doing what I needed to
to make myself happy

thinking back to childhood memories
of playing house and being a dad
with my friend across the street
imagining what it would be like
to be an adult
Never realizing that
I'd reach 37
and still feel like I don't know
what it should feel like
to be an adult

Sitting here thinking
that I've made so many strides forward
in the past 8 years
but even though I was moving forward
wondering if I haven't moved fast enough
and that I have lost the chance
to find love
and to be a father

The clock ticks, and I realize it's past 1
and I'm sitting here
wondering if writing things down
will help me move on the path faster
or if I'm still wasting time
« Last Edit: April 06, 2006, 02:42:45 PM by CellarDweller115 »

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« Reply #18 on: March 30, 2006, 05:06:17 AM »
Chuck....
no one that offers what you do and shares what you share
is ever wasting time..... :)

thanks,
L
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« Reply #19 on: March 30, 2006, 06:22:21 AM »
"Wasting Time" reinforces the concept of how quickly time goes by. We are helpless and vulnerable. Another great original, CellarDweller.

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« Reply #20 on: March 30, 2006, 07:04:32 AM »
"Wasting Time" reinforces the concept of how quickly time goes by. We are helpless and vulnerable. Another great original, CellarDweller.

couldn`t agree more
beatiful poem CD!!
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« Reply #21 on: March 30, 2006, 08:46:21 AM »
Chuck....
no one that offers what you do and shares what you share
is ever wasting time..... :)

thanks,
L

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« Reply #22 on: March 30, 2006, 11:16:34 PM »



Night visitor

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Your face above mine
as we lay in the bed
Your eyes convey messages
that for now are unsaid
you move closer and I feel
your weight on my chest
whiskers tickling my neck
this feeling's the best
your hands on my shoulders
and then they're on the move
you're a man on a mission
with something to prove
I can smell your musk
your scent makes me high
Your lips on my lips
your hands on my thigh
and then they move over
and I feel your grip
Your motions are sure
and I bite my lip
I feel like I'm going
into overload
and then, next to us
a sound does explode
I sit up in bed
to see you are not here
and the sound of the dj
is filling my ear.


That PHUCKIN' alarm clock!

Aww man, the sheets are sticky now!



 ;) ;D
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« Reply #23 on: March 30, 2006, 11:28:18 PM »
CD this one is realy hilarious  ;D  your good  :)
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« Reply #24 on: March 30, 2006, 11:35:17 PM »
CD this one is realy hilarious ;D your good :)

I'm glad everyone is liking them, but I hope other members add more stuff here.

Lance *taps foot*  I'm waiting....



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« Reply #25 on: March 30, 2006, 11:36:48 PM »



Moving On

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All my life you bought me hell
but now I've grown and wish you well

All my life you made me cry
but now I look up to the sky

All my life you made me doubt
but now I've got it figured out

All my life you gave me pain
but now I've made it through the rain

I took your blows, I took your strife
dealt with all the ways you tried to ruin my life

Now look at me, somebody new
not that tired little loser
who you once abused

I've succeed in many ways
that you will never see
'cause I'm surrounded now by friends
who taught me to love me for me

All my life you gave me fears
beat me down and gave me tears

I'm glad you're not around to see
the person i've turned out to be

Through the sadness I have sailed
all of your attempts have failed

Now I turn, and I move on
and from my memories, you're gone
« Last Edit: April 06, 2006, 02:40:08 PM by CellarDweller115 »

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« Reply #26 on: March 30, 2006, 11:42:41 PM »




Worth

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Making myself someone new
and now I know just what to do
tired of feeling lost and hollow
change the outside, inside will follow

starting to work on myself
change my physical and mental health
build up energy for the fight
see myself in a new light

I see success, It makes me high
but now I question myself why
why did I wait so damn long
to bring myself where I belong

I spent my life walking around
letting others put me down
let them have their way with me
to the point I could not see

Just how special that I am
Now I know "It's time, to jam"
gonna let myself have fun
spend my time out in the sun

Learn from the old me, it's his time to go
never let anyone hurt you so
look back on your life, from birth
realize just how much you're worth
« Last Edit: April 06, 2006, 02:39:05 PM by CellarDweller115 »

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« Reply #27 on: March 30, 2006, 11:51:28 PM »
oh menn CD those last two are so close to me as well.
when i have some more time will try it myself,did write poems when i was younger,but never in english,so dont know if i can.
thanks for these ones!!
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« Reply #28 on: March 31, 2006, 02:36:25 AM »
conny, i bet if you wrote them first then translated them into english for us, that would work!

here is one another one, just trying to get rid of some thoughts in my head:


SISTER SAYS

my sister, the mormon,
calls me on the phone, and
leaves messages, says she loves me.
but sister says she's worried, she says,
because sister says i'm going to burn in hell.

but she loves me (then she laughs).
god, i hate her because of this.

sister now tells me that it's okay to be gay,
but says that i just can't have gay sex.
because that, sister says, is a sin,
and i'm going to burn in hell.

(imagine, sister says, your flesh being burned off your body for millions of years.)

but she loves me.
i hate her because of this.

she says that being gay
is okay, but that because i'm gay,
i'll never be let into the kingdom of heaven.
no, sister says, you'll fucking burn in hell instead.
(then she laughs.)

but! sister says she loves me.
i hate her guts because of this.

sister now says that my mother,
because she's not a mormon,
is going to burn in hell too.
sister says that anybody
that is not a mormon
is going to burn in hell,
flesh burning off our bodies,
smelling nothing but burnt flesh
for an eternity or more (sister says).

sister says the mormon church has
nothing against gay people,
or against the jews,
or the buddhists,
or anybody.

but that we should
all know we're all
going to burn
in H E L L.

god, i hate her because of this,
where did my nice sister go,
i'd like to have her back.
PS: please tell her that
she's making my life
a living H E L L.
i've tried but
she will not
listen to
me.


(big organ in mormon church)


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« Reply #29 on: March 31, 2006, 07:10:24 AM »
"Night Visitor" is so nasty and erotic. I loved it! Ah, what X-rated dreams we can all conjure up in our subconscious minds!