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Offline Ironwood

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« Reply #60 on: April 08, 2006, 10:09:49 PM »
Newartz...thanks for the contribution...your post is obviously deeply felt. btw, welcome to the Forum.....cowboy ;)
Reborn in Paradise - Thanks Kerry for helping me rediscover the "paw the white out of the moon!" feeling.

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« Reply #61 on: April 09, 2006, 05:52:55 AM »
Dave M

you should write more buddy!

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« Reply #62 on: April 09, 2006, 04:55:43 PM »
As sun light shines
on my closed eyes
I'm awaken by my heart's cry
and another dream had ended

I rise to start another day
Another day without you
Another day of missing you
Another day wondering where you are

Before it is seen
I put on my mask
to hide my loneliness
and never disclosing my pain

I go through the day living a lie
Pretending everything is fine
Fighting back the tears
and stifling my cries

I wait for the sun to end it's shine
and for the moon to show it's side
The time of my peace is here
The sweet solitude of sleep is near....

Nellie
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« Reply #63 on: April 09, 2006, 10:49:14 PM »
Nellie, your poem on Reply #72 reminds me of that song, "Don't Cry Out Loud."  Wonderful poem!

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« Reply #64 on: April 10, 2006, 12:17:50 AM »
nellie wow!!! such a beautiful poem!!
could just as well be me
"we are one,but we are not the same"   U2

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« Reply #65 on: April 10, 2006, 04:43:57 AM »
Thanks guys :)
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« Reply #66 on: April 10, 2006, 09:49:01 AM »
It's sooo cool to see more members here posting up work.

Nice poems Iron, and Nellie!

I've wanted to write some more....but inspiration hasn't hit yet.

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« Reply #67 on: April 10, 2006, 10:24:23 AM »
Auntie's Diner

Auntie's words of wisdom open 24/7
Nick's inspiring pictures and warm embraces
Jackie's loving thoughts and support
Conny's goodness in heart ,brings the best out of
Chuck,his laughter roars and allows
Brad to forget the worlds troubles

Faith and be Glory to all
Michaelflanagan brings to this diner,as
Lance rolls his eye and fills this place with shiny smiles
Heidi keeps us on our toes as she comments as
Tigs peeks in and whispers joy and giggles

Casper,the friendly ghost,flies in
always has something nice to say
Welcoming Beej63,Texasmama,Institches oh there's
Robin_eight and Garry_lh
Boris,oh Boris,you can be serious and silly,what a fun guy

Mi Amigo,Esteban,my brother
you bring joy to my tears
and warmth to this diner

Rob's sweet words and smiles bring out our best,
one member in particular,indeed
RobspalGal you make us laugh,
Gnash you are a sweet man,so true and dreamy
BrokenOkie you're a shiny star
you brighten my day
Dsmom you are a gift.We look for your strength

BubbleWrap...girl,you sweet rock'in gal that brings
music to our voices
Downloaded you come and cheer us on
raising your glass to life !
Oh Wdj you add cheer and laughter too
Carol peeks in and encourages our insanity

Twtplanner who sits looking our way and smiling
his words,give me a couple of eggs,a little overcooked,he says
As we all run around trying to please each other

Welcoming all who come even for a second
Oh there's Ross and Cabin waving away,winking
Don't forget me;don't forget me !

How can we?

I wonder why I am here?
I question this world why
There aren't more like us.
What bought us together?

The answer,read from the top, again !

Nellie
« Last Edit: April 10, 2006, 10:50:22 AM by mcnell1120 »
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« Reply #68 on: April 10, 2006, 10:36:01 AM »
beneath the sink

I was in love again.
from a distance I loved him
while up close I closed.
we talked around
and had moments alone
but never together.
I think he knew,
but I never knew.
Word was he was lonely.
And so was I.
But admiration's shadow darkened my light
and I doubted he cared.

I wanted him
more than I wanted

I was afraid

I stood outside after a long walk to his door
though he only lived down the road.
I wanted to knock
to be friendly or kind
or tell him my heart beat to his heartbeat
and sang to his song

but I left alone and dreamed of his head on a pillow white cloud, sleeping alone

In the morning I heard

While I had waited to knock
While I had waited for courage
to tell him the truth

He had crawled into a ball like a fetus at birth
inside of the cabinet
beneath the sink
alone and died



Ennis, just quit your hammerin' and git in here.

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« Reply #69 on: April 10, 2006, 10:45:33 AM »
Nelly youre the best!!!  :) love it
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« Reply #70 on: April 10, 2006, 10:47:30 AM »
Newartz,
such a lovely,but sad poem
"we are one,but we are not the same"   U2

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« Reply #71 on: April 10, 2006, 11:19:33 AM »
Nellie, your tribute to "Auntie's Diner" along with mentioning certain members with their contributions is praiseworthy.

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« Reply #72 on: April 10, 2006, 11:20:12 AM »
Nellie, your tribute to "Auntie's Diner" along with mentioning certain members with their contributions is praiseworthy.

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« Reply #73 on: April 10, 2006, 11:23:51 AM »
NewArtz, "Beneath the Sink" is the kind of poem that distinguishes the professional from the novice.  You have the talent to offer twists and turns leading up to a "punch in the stomach" ending.  "Beneath the Sink" is a powerhouse!

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« Reply #74 on: April 10, 2006, 11:26:58 AM »
NewArtz...yes indeed..talent.........so sad and true to heart...:)...hugs

Nellie
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