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« Reply #1080 on: February 10, 2017, 12:52:02 AM »
thank you, guys. and gal. :D  :-*

brokeback is still very much alive in my heart.. <3

"Brokeback is about a lost paradise, an Eden."  – Ang Lee


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« Reply #1081 on: February 12, 2017, 03:50:08 AM »

a feather in time



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because brokeback has been gone
for so long, and heath as well
:(  :'(

and jake isn't jack anymore
(at least in some eyes)

I guess that's why Jake's threads are so quiet nowadays...

To me, Jake will always be Jack, just like he is all of the other characters he has ever played - or will play. It's such a comfort to know how special Brokeback was (and still is) for Jake - he has said so many, many times.

Bittersweet memories... A feather in time, indeed  :'(

Brokeback is still very much alive in my heart, too.
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« Reply #1082 on: February 16, 2017, 08:53:27 PM »

 :(  :'(


I guess that's why Jake's threads are so quiet nowadays...

To me, Jake will always be Jack, just like he is all of the other characters he has ever played - or will play. It's such a comfort to know how special Brokeback was (and still is) for Jake - he has said so many, many times.

Bittersweet memories... A feather in time, indeed  :'(

Brokeback is still very much alive in my heart, too.

yaaasss, jake's always jack, and heath stopped at ennis, at least in my eyes. :o so glad you're still feeling the brokeback love!






ennis: you won't ever forget me, will you?

jack: no way. i couldn't. even if i tried.

ennis: look in my eyes and say that.

"Brokeback is about a lost paradise, an Eden."  – Ang Lee


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« Reply #1083 on: March 18, 2017, 05:04:52 PM »

a feather in time



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because brokeback has been gone
for so long, and heath as well
and jake isn't jack anymore
(at least in some eyes)

because the mountain's been gone so long
we forget the feather in jack's black hat

but there are folks here who know
their magic tides come and grow
let's tilt our heads to the south
to say it with an open mouth
we will not ever dare forget
the film that made us cry




Lovely, Jimmy!

Düva pööp is a förce of natüre

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« Reply #1084 on: March 18, 2017, 05:07:26 PM »


familiar territory






these roads and highways
traveled so frequently
etched in my mind

jack and ennis
mountain bound
kiss the moon's sky

a bitch of a situation
teeth bring blood
too much now

a stone put up
his ashes interred
where bluebirds cry

no cake right now
silence as song
jack i swear
i'll say so
long







Love this! Both map and poem!

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« Reply #1085 on: May 15, 2017, 04:51:05 PM »



Lovely, Jimmy!

thank you, sonja!! ^_^

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« Reply #1086 on: December 14, 2018, 10:59:21 PM »





YOU


you
a snowflake
me
a dull tent stake
driven hard
i bent
in directions my legs never went
i warned
i feared
i told you so
and now you're gone
to where i cannot go
only now can i see
that you
held the better part of me
the only thing real
a memory
i will
keep you safe
keep you now
for somehow
i must go on
before my children
too
pass as shadows
i have not known
for love i faltered
i made mistakes
i gave up what was before me
for the sake of
our place
our secret
my bloodied shirt and yours
a postcard
a closet
a house
a cave
in fields of wheat
homeless
alone
i travel
trails of dust
for freedom
from my hell
if only
i could tell
you
the snowflake
fell
upon my lips
admit to
the lie
i was wrong
you were right
more often
than i
upon the mountain
cold
has now become
what i can only call
my home
my sport of
fishing
i dipped into you
and you keep me
for all time                             




this is designed to be read vertically or horizontally.
it's ennis on the left, and jack on the right.












howdy... i'm reposting this to fix the coding errors
that appeared outta nowhere for whatever reason! :D
also, my husband wrote this one, not me.  8)

"Brokeback is about a lost paradise, an Eden."  – Ang Lee


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« Reply #1087 on: December 15, 2018, 03:02:47 AM »
Love it. (Didn’t know husband was a poet too.)
“When we grow older still we’ll speak about those two young men as if they were two strangers..... And we’ll want to call it envy, because to call it regret would break our hearts.”

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« Reply #1088 on: December 15, 2018, 05:21:39 AM »
I love it too, Jimmy! I did not know this thread existed... ❤️
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« Reply #1089 on: December 15, 2018, 08:58:44 AM »
Geaux Jimmy and hubby!

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« Reply #1090 on: December 15, 2018, 03:04:26 PM »
This is beautiful, Jimmy! D is so very talented!!❤️
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« Reply #1091 on: December 15, 2018, 09:14:23 PM »
Great post Jimmy!!!